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3. Findings

Figure 1 shows the sales trends of Smart Kids toys in the USA, China, and Japan between 1990 and 1999.

3.1 China Before 1992, the sales steadily declined from $ 40 million to $ 20 million and leveled off in the following four years. Starting from 1995, sales rose quite sharply to nearly $ 60 million.

3.2 US and Japan While China decreased before 1993, the sales in both US and Japan markets increased steadily and reached a peak to $ 50 million and $ 40 million respectively. Despite the stable sales in 1994, US suffered a sharp drop in sales to $ 30 million. Similarly, sales in Japan stayed in the highest state for 2 years followed by a fairly sharp drop till 1997 to $ 10 million. From 1997 onwards, sales in Japan were positioned at the lowest level. On the contrary, sales in the US fluctuated from 1996 to 1999 ranging from $ 20 million to $ 50 million.

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